我的英文简历 请海友们修正

nova327

6ys,2001-4000? 大哥 你叫兄弟们咋混?

smiling1314

同意楼上的。。
您这成本也太低了吧

football8675

From my side:

You are not a fresh grudate so you must focus on your work experience not your edu experience.

For example, you must note down what you have done in your work span. not just the company you worked for.else I do think the HR will think that

you only spent your time on playing or some else.

we can take a sentence in your cv for example:

-->Constitute the machining process and write the program of numerical control
Do you think it is so simple that if I am interviewer/hr, I am not sure I can know what is your main work and what technology you have.

just some suggestion  from my side

SKmadfrog

Mis-Julia

原帖由 football8675 于 2008-11-19 09:04 发表
From my side:

You are not a fresh grudate so you must focus on your work experience not your edu experience.

For example, you must note down what you have done in your work span. not just the company you worked for.else I do think the HR will think that

you only spent your time on playing or some else.

we can take a sentence in your cv for example:

-->Constitute the machining process and write the program of numerical control
Do you think it is so simple that if I am interviewer/hr, I am not sure I can know what is your main work and what technology you have.

just some suggestion  from my side

同意。

楼主，我不是做技术的，所以我不知道你应该focus在哪些有价值的经验。

不过我猜想，你的中文简历也是有问题的。先好好修改一下中文部分吧，然后根据中文部分修改英文简历

否则很难给你修改语法。

football8675

原帖由 Mis-Julia 于 2008-11-19 09:30 发表



同意。

楼主，我不是做技术的，所以我不知道你应该focus在哪些有价值的经验。

不过我猜想，你的中文简历也是有问题的。先好好修改一下中文部分吧，然后根据中文部分修改英文简历

否则很难给你修改语法。

MIMI很认真啊

As a person who has no foreign company experience, will do not konw which should be concentrate on. sometimes will do not know how to discribe
the technologies he/she has.
But I think the most one is try to write some main work you have done before,such as you have 3years working experience in unix server administration and you hand on the unix and can resolve the unix issues which often happen and give an example which you have solved.

From my own side

wangxiangkai

I'm sorry.
大面上 我是机械转行IT的所以头两年是做数控机床编程的(和软件编程不搭边) 尔后两年才是转行做企业网管
有可能没有必要写头两年的工作经历但是 作为一个非科班出身的我觉得受过的IT培训是必须写的 而简历自动生成工作经验6年是错误的 真正的IT工作经验只有两年所以价格要的比较合适况且企业网管不是核心职位

看样子必须得手动写一份了 网站自动生成的对于我这样转行的人来说太不合适了

football8675

原帖由 wangxiangkai 于 2008-11-19 11:31 发表
I'm sorry.
大面上 我是机械转行IT的所以头两年是做数控机床编程的(和软件编程不搭边) 尔后两年才是转行做企业网管
有可能没有必要写头两年的工作经历但是 作为一个非科班出身的我觉得受过的IT培训是必须写的 而简历自动生成工作经验6年是错误的 真正的IT工作经验只有两年所以价格要的比较合适况且企业网管不是核心职位

看样子必须得手动写一份了 网站自动生成的对于我这样转行的人来说太不合适了

Yes, you should write a resume manually,

First, it can show you that you hands on english and you can tell the interviewer that you are confident in that.

Second, created auto only displayed that some aspect which maybe you are not very good at, so you should focus on the point which you good at and write more on it.

wangxiangkai

楼上的 你英文不错的说

[ 本帖最后由 wangxiangkai 于 2008-11-19 11:58 编辑 ]

football8675

原帖由 wangxiangkai 于 2008-11-19 11:54 发表
楼上的 你英文不错的说

多谢夸奖啊，很一般的说